A poem
I loved hearing your voice reading the poem. And I liked reading the poem through the voice in my head. But I purposefully tried not to look at the photos, to keep them from bullying the images the words were singing.
Lovely. Thank you.
Her voice
Marked by time,
Seems to come
From far away,
As if from a distant past
And takes shape
In images
So vivid...
" Da prendere il volo " .
( Ciao L.id)
A wonderful,yes,poem.
Thank you from a lifelong fan.
that's an interesting POV in forms... i would change the word 'lung' to 'plunge'...that's just making more sense to my ears...
Likewise!
The idea of words searching for a container, like a transparent lung, is a striking way to look at form.
I loved hearing your voice reading the poem. And I liked reading the poem through the voice in my head. But I purposefully tried not to look at the photos, to keep them from bullying the images the words were singing.
Lovely. Thank you.
Her voice
Marked by time,
Seems to come
From far away,
As if from a distant past
And takes shape
In images
So vivid...
" Da prendere il volo " .
( Ciao L.id)
A wonderful,yes,poem.
Thank you from a lifelong fan.
that's an interesting POV in forms... i would change the word 'lung' to 'plunge'...that's just making more sense to my ears...
Likewise!
The idea of words searching for a container, like a transparent lung, is a striking way to look at form.
that's an interesting POV in forms... i would change the word 'lung' to 'plunge'...that's just making more sense to my ears...