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Gail Shields's avatar

Frightening and amazing and sad.

Prince the VIIth's avatar

SOLID THANKS GIVING. FOR IT WAS CROSSED ON A STEEL BRIDGE.

Graeme Outerbridge's avatar

Love the Old Bridge, Storyteller^^

Douglas Halpert's avatar

When I drive through some of the small, forgotten towns here in Ohio, this story resonates with me. Those of you who have not yet read her novel Butcher (published in 2024) should do so. It is a wonderfully told story.

Mishtu's avatar

I am enjoying listening to, rather than reading, the story; while getting meds and breakfast ready. Love Substack voice capability.

Tom Bensley's avatar

Damn I had no idea this was gonna go where it went. Wonderful to read, I love having longer fiction to read on substack too.

Don A in Pennsultucky's avatar

I have seen that bridge, or at least one like it, on back roads in west-central Illinois. One sticks out in my memory because the road leading to it was no longer there because the bridge was more than a little shaky.

Themes and Deviations's avatar

That story completely defies comment.

Anita Söderman's avatar

Thank you, extraordinary! You sure can smell and see it all....in not so often described surroundings....